Tuesday, August 23, 2005

The illutions of reality...

So I decided to post one more time... and for those reading this who know me, they know this post is something they didn´t imagine I could do. You see, writing the lines below is something that is not commonly on my veins, so I hope you like what I have wrote in this rare occasion.


They met in a party with lots of guests
She came lovely and innocent
In her white cotton dress

He was invited to this fest long ago
This was the first time he decided to go

She came from a place of dreams
He came from the beginning of things
Soon they fell in love
After a dance their gaze got caught

She said she could live forever
He said he lasts for ever
She said she could do anything with him
He stared at her and grabbed her chin

After a while marvelous things she did
And in every one of them his touch was in
For long together they have lived
A happy couple, both building a wish

But later on, things get all torn
When she was happier, he seemed to be gone
When he returned, she was completely broke
And together they were no more

In a big party was this white dressed girl
Who met a boy that could change her fate
She said to know him she wanted
He said long ago he had her

They were both together and then
there's nobody but him to blame
She said PROMISE was her name
TIME was his, and he will brake her again

The End.


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  • A surprise indeed, and a very beautiful one I have to say. Life is full of unknown pleasures, and reading you is one of them. Great poem dude.

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  • Just wonderfull.
    Read this feels like a whisper on my ear. It's sad, but it always happends.
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